As they leave the trailer they notice a crowd gathering Pointing into the Sky and Murmuring " what is it , It looks like a "
Our two actors look up and are shocked to see ....
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Never Ending
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by SeanBreathnach » Tue May 01, 2007 7:22 pm
...a massive poster for the latest Egomotion production.
JJ
We should go in for that.
BOB
They'd never have us. They are too selective.
JJ
I hear they live in a large cinema, 50 stories beneath the ground.
BOB
It's true. And no one has ever seen their faces.
JJ
Sher, for all I know you could be one of them!
BOB
Ahahaha! Go on now.
JJ
We should go in for that.
BOB
They'd never have us. They are too selective.
JJ
I hear they live in a large cinema, 50 stories beneath the ground.
BOB
It's true. And no one has ever seen their faces.
JJ
Sher, for all I know you could be one of them!
BOB
Ahahaha! Go on now.
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by Teatowel » Tue May 08, 2007 7:22 pm
JJ narrows his eyes at BOB, who laughs nervously. BOB closes his fingers around the special lime coloured (limited edition) egomotion potato gun, concealed within his inside jacket pocket.
BOB (mutters under breath)
..hmm..they told me only to use this under extreme circumstances, when people are getting to close to the truth...
JJ
eh?
BOB (coughs guiltily)
..er..nothing, nothing..
JJ
why is your hand inside your jacket like that? come to think of it..why are you even wearing a jacket today..it's 27 degrees..
BOB (sweats)
er..
JJ moves to pull off BOB's jacket. BOB panics, whips out the gun and pulls the trigger. The small portion of high speed potato lashes into the air and hits....
BOB (mutters under breath)
..hmm..they told me only to use this under extreme circumstances, when people are getting to close to the truth...
JJ
eh?
BOB (coughs guiltily)
..er..nothing, nothing..
JJ
why is your hand inside your jacket like that? come to think of it..why are you even wearing a jacket today..it's 27 degrees..
BOB (sweats)
er..
JJ moves to pull off BOB's jacket. BOB panics, whips out the gun and pulls the trigger. The small portion of high speed potato lashes into the air and hits....
"whenever you feel stressed, do something different. Roll up your sleeves, peel an orange.."
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by Sean » Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:36 pm
JJ right between the eyes.
JJ
OOOwwww, what was that For , you could have taken my .......
JJ collapses into Bobs arms from the Heavy tranquiliser that the spudgun ammo has been soaked in, Bob then drags him back into the trailer and lays JJ gently on the Floor.
Bob
You'll be fine in a couple of hours JJ and you won't remember a thing , sorry bud .
Bob reaches into his Pocket and takes out a mobile and Dials as he stands up .
Bob
Cherry ( pauses ) Yes I was told to dial this number in the event ...(Pauses) , Trailer number 6 ... ( Pauses ). Fine
Bob hangs up and turns to review JJ again
Bob
See ya tomorrow JJ .
Bob steps out of the trailer and Closes the door behind him , fishes a key from his pocket and locks the door , he turns and walks away from the trailer , the camera Pans away towards where a 4x4 is reversing up to the tow hitch of the trailer and a man in a black suit with black shades gets out and hitches it up ......
JJ
OOOwwww, what was that For , you could have taken my .......
JJ collapses into Bobs arms from the Heavy tranquiliser that the spudgun ammo has been soaked in, Bob then drags him back into the trailer and lays JJ gently on the Floor.
Bob
You'll be fine in a couple of hours JJ and you won't remember a thing , sorry bud .
Bob reaches into his Pocket and takes out a mobile and Dials as he stands up .
Bob
Cherry ( pauses ) Yes I was told to dial this number in the event ...(Pauses) , Trailer number 6 ... ( Pauses ). Fine
Bob hangs up and turns to review JJ again
Bob
See ya tomorrow JJ .
Bob steps out of the trailer and Closes the door behind him , fishes a key from his pocket and locks the door , he turns and walks away from the trailer , the camera Pans away towards where a 4x4 is reversing up to the tow hitch of the trailer and a man in a black suit with black shades gets out and hitches it up ......
The Path of Excess Leads to the Tower of Wisdom
There's a shop on the way , will you pick me up a pack of cigarettes ?
Oh and when you're nearly here give me a buzz and I'll put the kettle on.
There's a shop on the way , will you pick me up a pack of cigarettes ?
Oh and when you're nearly here give me a buzz and I'll put the kettle on.
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by oisinmaccoille » Mon Jul 30, 2007 10:59 pm
he takes a handkerchief from his pocket and pats his forehead he can hear snoring from the inside of the trailer where jj is sleeping on the floor. he looks around then opens the drivers side door and gets in
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Re: Never Ending
by Dan » Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:43 pm
Meanwhile....
INT. Old Egomotion Cinema 50 - story's underground - the dead of night
The room is dark with gentle lime glow surrounding the empty seats in the cinema.
In the centre of the cinema there is a 20ft x 20ft area where the seats have been removed, in this square area is a table, and on this table lies a body with its stomach cut open, a large man (egocentric no1) stands over the body and is wearing surgical scrubs and a surgical mask, he is holding an axle grinder in his hands.
ENTER Egocentric no 2
EGOCENTRIC NO 1
"Is is done?"
EGOCENTRIC NO 2
(folding his phone that he just finished using)
"it's done, he's bringing him now"
EGOCENTRIC NO 1
and what about the....
INT. Old Egomotion Cinema 50 - story's underground - the dead of night
The room is dark with gentle lime glow surrounding the empty seats in the cinema.
In the centre of the cinema there is a 20ft x 20ft area where the seats have been removed, in this square area is a table, and on this table lies a body with its stomach cut open, a large man (egocentric no1) stands over the body and is wearing surgical scrubs and a surgical mask, he is holding an axle grinder in his hands.
ENTER Egocentric no 2
EGOCENTRIC NO 1
"Is is done?"
EGOCENTRIC NO 2
(folding his phone that he just finished using)
"it's done, he's bringing him now"
EGOCENTRIC NO 1
and what about the....
"Friends help you move. Real friends help you move bodies."
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Re: Never Ending
by Lorraine » Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:35 pm
I continued from the end of page one by accident. oh well!!
INT- FILMSET- DAY
The two actors begrudgingly get back to work, tired and sick of the monotonous script they have been memorising.
After countless attempts at injecting excitement into the script, the director calls quits and they agree to return the next morning; fresh and enthusiastic.
INT-FILMSET- DAY
The following morning people are bustling around the lively set and preparing props and backdrops for the day's scenes.
INT- TRAILER- DAY
JJ and Bob are getting ready for the shoot. JJ is sitting on a stiff wooden chair and Bob is standing behind him, gelling his hair. Suddenly JJ sees something beautiful pass their trailer window. He gets up and sticks his face to the glass, hoping to get a better view. Unsuccessful, he runs out the door and down the steps of the trailer , Bob following behind curiously. JJ stops in his tracks when he sees what he was looking for. Walking confidently across the parking lot is EVE, a stunning girl with black hair flowing down her back, long legs and sparkling blue eyes.
BOB
She must be the new actress. Hamilton said he was going to
hire someone to liven things up
Both men stare transfixed, as the girl waves at them confidently and struts into the building.
INT- FILMSET- DAY
MR HAMILTON (DIRECTOR)
Are you sure you're capable enough to handle this without anyone finding out?
as you know, i've had my doubts about hiring a woman to do something so risky...
its imperative that you dont get caught
EVE
Dont worry Mr. Hamilton, i've got it all figured out...
.
INT- FILMSET- DAY
The two actors begrudgingly get back to work, tired and sick of the monotonous script they have been memorising.
After countless attempts at injecting excitement into the script, the director calls quits and they agree to return the next morning; fresh and enthusiastic.
INT-FILMSET- DAY
The following morning people are bustling around the lively set and preparing props and backdrops for the day's scenes.
INT- TRAILER- DAY
JJ and Bob are getting ready for the shoot. JJ is sitting on a stiff wooden chair and Bob is standing behind him, gelling his hair. Suddenly JJ sees something beautiful pass their trailer window. He gets up and sticks his face to the glass, hoping to get a better view. Unsuccessful, he runs out the door and down the steps of the trailer , Bob following behind curiously. JJ stops in his tracks when he sees what he was looking for. Walking confidently across the parking lot is EVE, a stunning girl with black hair flowing down her back, long legs and sparkling blue eyes.
BOB
She must be the new actress. Hamilton said he was going to
hire someone to liven things up
Both men stare transfixed, as the girl waves at them confidently and struts into the building.
INT- FILMSET- DAY
MR HAMILTON (DIRECTOR)
Are you sure you're capable enough to handle this without anyone finding out?
as you know, i've had my doubts about hiring a woman to do something so risky...
its imperative that you dont get caught
EVE
Dont worry Mr. Hamilton, i've got it all figured out...
.
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Re: Never Ending
by ned » Thu Jan 31, 2008 12:53 am
[quote="Lorraine"]I continued from the end of page one by accident. oh well!!
INT- FILMSET- DAY
The two actors begrudgingly get back to work, tired and sick of the monotonous script they have been memorising.
After countless attempts at injecting excitement into the script, the director calls quits and they agree to return the next morning; fresh and enthusiastic.
INT-FILMSET- DAY
The following morning people are bustling around the lively set and preparing props and backdrops for the day's scenes.
INT- TRAILER- DAY
JJ and Bob are getting ready for the shoot. JJ is sitting on a stiff wooden chair and Bob is standing behind him, gelling his hair. Suddenly JJ sees something beautiful pass their trailer window. He gets up and sticks his face to the glass, hoping to get a better view. Unsuccessful, he runs out the door and down the steps of the trailer , Bob following behind curiously. JJ stops in his tracks when he sees what he was looking for. Walking confidently across the parking lot is EVE, a stunning girl with black hair flowing down her back, long legs and sparkling blue eyes.
BOB
She must be the new actress. Hamilton said he was going to
hire someone to liven things up
Both men stare transfixed, as the girl waves at them confidently and struts into the building.
INT- FILMSET- DAY
MR HAMILTON (DIRECTOR)
Are you sure you're capable enough to handle this without anyone finding out?
as you know, i've had my doubts about hiring a woman to do something so risky...
its imperative that you dont get caught
EVE
Dont worry Mr. Hamilton, i've got it all figured out...
Mr Hamilton
Y ou are very confident with yourself,then with a body like yours i guess you would?
Eve
I got where i am by useing my brains,and i also have got a very good memory
Mr Hamilton
What do you mean by that?
Eve
Are you trying to act the smart ass mr hamilton
Or have you just got a short memory?
INT- FILMSET- DAY
The two actors begrudgingly get back to work, tired and sick of the monotonous script they have been memorising.
After countless attempts at injecting excitement into the script, the director calls quits and they agree to return the next morning; fresh and enthusiastic.
INT-FILMSET- DAY
The following morning people are bustling around the lively set and preparing props and backdrops for the day's scenes.
INT- TRAILER- DAY
JJ and Bob are getting ready for the shoot. JJ is sitting on a stiff wooden chair and Bob is standing behind him, gelling his hair. Suddenly JJ sees something beautiful pass their trailer window. He gets up and sticks his face to the glass, hoping to get a better view. Unsuccessful, he runs out the door and down the steps of the trailer , Bob following behind curiously. JJ stops in his tracks when he sees what he was looking for. Walking confidently across the parking lot is EVE, a stunning girl with black hair flowing down her back, long legs and sparkling blue eyes.
BOB
She must be the new actress. Hamilton said he was going to
hire someone to liven things up
Both men stare transfixed, as the girl waves at them confidently and struts into the building.
INT- FILMSET- DAY
MR HAMILTON (DIRECTOR)
Are you sure you're capable enough to handle this without anyone finding out?
as you know, i've had my doubts about hiring a woman to do something so risky...
its imperative that you dont get caught
EVE
Dont worry Mr. Hamilton, i've got it all figured out...
Mr Hamilton
Y ou are very confident with yourself,then with a body like yours i guess you would?
Eve
I got where i am by useing my brains,and i also have got a very good memory
Mr Hamilton
What do you mean by that?
Eve
Are you trying to act the smart ass mr hamilton
Or have you just got a short memory?
all you need is love
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Re: Never Ending
by hanman100 » Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:44 pm
Hamilton: (looks away) “Just say that you can do this,”
Eve: “I can do it. But tell me, have they any idea who they really are?”
Hamilton: (Turns back and stare hard at Eve) “I don’t think so but we can’t take the chance anymore. The head in the box of limes was supposed to do the job…”
Eve: “You have been relying on armatures to long Hamilton. Now step aside a let a professional do her job.
Hamilton: (Steps aside as Eve leaves the building) “Will it be messy.” (he calls after her in a loud whisper, trying not to let his voice travel)
Eve: (Says over her shoulder) “Let’s just say I wouldn’t ware my best suit if I were you.”
Eve: “I can do it. But tell me, have they any idea who they really are?”
Hamilton: (Turns back and stare hard at Eve) “I don’t think so but we can’t take the chance anymore. The head in the box of limes was supposed to do the job…”
Eve: “You have been relying on armatures to long Hamilton. Now step aside a let a professional do her job.
Hamilton: (Steps aside as Eve leaves the building) “Will it be messy.” (he calls after her in a loud whisper, trying not to let his voice travel)
Eve: (Says over her shoulder) “Let’s just say I wouldn’t ware my best suit if I were you.”
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Re: Never Ending
by edGFC » Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:10 am
The refreshing sip revitalises JJ. He retires to his trailer where he assumes the Buddha pose and enters a deep meditative state. He starts to chant.
CUT TO:
EXT. TRAILER:
JJ's chanting emanates from the lone trailer and echoes throughout the lot.
CUT TO:
EXT. TRAILER:
JJ's chanting emanates from the lone trailer and echoes throughout the lot.
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